BEST DESCRIPTIVE SENTENCES
This post is a collection of some of the best sentences from 10 of my blog posts. They can also be found in my new book ‘Writing with Stardust’. To see the book and its accompanying workbook, just click the title: Writing with Stardust.
I hope you enjoy the post and I will upload another selection soon. With luck the sentences will inspire ideas for your writing. Take care for now. Liam.
1. It was womb quiet by the stream and even the moth-flutter had died down.
2. Pebbles whisked about in the underwash like little pieces of glitter.
3. A galaxy of dragonflies fizzed through the beams of light, wings a-glirr in the magical space between river and air.
1. The river was a fragile, universe-blue colour, like the subtle sweep of a painter’s brush.
2. The trout arced into the air, his body glistening, performing the ballet of the river. With a plunking sound, he darted back to the shadowed depths, his catch already safe in his spotted belly.
3. The mist faded, allowing the Technicolor of nature to be turned up like a light switch.
THUNDER AND LIGHTNING:
1. The autumn sky was as bright as Zeus’ eyes. Nary a cloud blemished its bliss-blue complexion and the sun was like a glowing medallion pinned to a sheet of white paper.
2. Branched lightning lit up the Stygian sky. It was like liquid, golden ore streaks were being forged into forks above my head.
3. Wriggling and writhing with the pain of its existence, it flashed once, glossy and polished, like the cold, gold prongs of the Apocalypse.
1. The fire’s lambent light stole away the velvet-black shadows dancing on the wall.
2. Thyme-filled turkeys sizzled on the oven foil.
3. An angel was perched on top of the tree, glittering with its flash-silver lustre.
LOST AT SEA:
1. The emptiness in my soul matches the spiritless sky and the featureless waterscape around me.
2. I am floundering in a sea of divine-blue quicklime and there’s no escape.
3. The moon casts down splinters of Solomon-gold, making the sea-crests sparkle like elf light.
1. Fog-tinted fairy trees stand alone in fields, noosed by coils of dragon breath.
2. Owl light replaces daylight as autumn comes to a close. The seething energy of the forest becomes vow silent as promises to nature are kept.
3. A weak pitter-patter is heard, but is not the sound of children’s feet. It is the centuries-old, hissing drip of raindrops in caves.
THE BEACH AT DAWN:
1. The horizon seemed to be stitched with a line of silver.
2. The seagulls wheeled and arced, their raucous cries ringing off the cliff. There was a strange glamour to their timeless call as they soared between the wands of God-goldened light.
3. A single yacht bobbed and lolled in the incoming tide, like a toy in a bath. Its lights winked saucily as the wave-crests rose gently.
DESCRIBING A LAKE:
1. A broad span of Tuscany-blue sky was slashed above the lake, making it appear like nature’s amphitheatre.
2. Tolkein-esque ferns swayed beside a brook that spiralled down from a turf moor.
3. At the bottom, smooth-edged stones glowed amber with a witchery uncommon to the modern world.
1. Spring is glee. It’s a fizzy tonic, like a slowly overflowing bottle of bubbling joy.
2. Thumb-plump bumblebees, wings a-thrum, loot from honeypots of mustard-yellow flowers.
3. Overhead, an exodus of banished birds appears as if out of a Celtic fairytale.
1. A sol-fa of song erupts as the stars fade away, the ancient alchemy of the dawn chorus.
2. The perpetual skies of summer are buckled with clouds and they flare up in a luminous, neon-blue when the mood takes them.
3. A goulash of scents twirls above the satin soft petals and the pear sweet taste in the air is a blessed joy.
Now here are 10 of my favourite words to use in an essay on nature. Some words just ‘do’ it for you. Having said that, they have a pleasing sound also. This is called a ‘phonoaesthetic’ quality. I had to put in ‘wood sorrel’. For some reason, it’s always fascinated me. Maybe it is because it’s an edible plant. Anyway, here are the words. You can also look up my hundred favourite words to use in an essay by clicking here: https://descriptivewriting.wordpress.com/2012/09/15/ioo-beautiful-words/
10. wood sorrel
(……and my favourite word of all time is frazil-silver. Frazil is the old word for the ice crystals tumbling down a mountain stream.) It’s difficult to beat that.
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I hope you enjoyed the post.